Illicit Reaper

too many guitars in the final chorus until the outro, it's more like blackened metalcore actually, guitar riffs feel rhythmically out of place in this sort of track, need overdriven rock bass maybe, maybe a low chug-pedal riff would've worked for verse.

preview sounds like blackened death metal, that's big leap of heaviness for a 1st metal song.

I made an animation with this song, hope you like it!